2 December 2010

to say goodbye, say hello

This is a poem I wrote a while ago (6 months?) and has been sitting on scrap paper because I didn't really know if I was happy with it... but now we are moving and it seemed wrong to throw it away so here goes:

"What is it, Gran?"
I said, as
I held her softly wrinkled hand
beside her bed.

She said,
"I see a man..."
(Her eyes were quite clearly closed.)
"He has a face marked
with a mountainous ravine;
chasms never to be seen,
and sunlight shines
from the other side."

Her words made no sense to me.
"Who is the man you're seeing?
Do you know him by name?"
"No", she said, "But...
I know him all the same.

His hands are lit a fiery red
He said he came unto my bed
to wish me luck for the other side
his fiery arms spread open wide.

Not the best looking soul,
I might add
but he does have the same eyes
as your Grandad

...sparkling like the ocean blue,
and smiling at me now, too."

"Do you think it's Death?", I suggested
immediately knowing
my words sounded odd
She sat a while;
a little nod.
"I'm cold", she whispered.

She sat there then
and said no more
until 
"Dear, knocking at this door
is an aura bathed in hot white
to catch my last breath tonight.
This my dear, is Death, you see.
He has come to escort me.

He's not like I thought he'd be." 

Quietly now, her hand relaxed.
Her face smoothed
and with a final sigh,
the corners of her mouth lifted
and she smiled goodbye.

1 comment:

julie5 said...

Have only just found this , Claire. I really do think you should look at getting some of your poetry published. This is so different from what you usually write but still very clever and moving. Amazing girl that you are